So despite watching the whole video, I have no idea what the story is. There were some spelling mistakes that took away from whatever story you were trying to tell, and I *heavily* suggest using a specific font for your text instead of hand-writing. The way you write the letter n is too similar to the letter h, which can make it hard to read. That and organic hand writing is harder to read unless you're the one who wrote it. There was also an audio issue where the music overpowered the text sound effects, and it was so loud that I had to reduce the volume.

So, the animation's okay, but the writing is completely off. There were several setups for potential jokes, but they literally went nowhere, and almost every new addition was random and added nothing.

Prime example that random =/= funny.

Nicely done! Hope to see the completed version!

Fun little puzzle game.

Nice callback to the rage game era.

Cool concept! Would be nice if they kept up the radio to feature new hits from the site.

I love retro-style anime art! This looks really good!