ThatElfNerd's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Worlds project chapter2 a new encounter]

So despite watching the whole video, I have no idea what the story is. There were some spelling mistakes that took away from whatever story you were trying to tell, and I *heavily* suggest using a specific font for your text instead of hand-writing. The way you write the letter n is too similar to the letter h, which can make it hard to read. That and organic hand writing is harder to read unless you're the one who wrote it. There was also an audio issue where the music overpowered the text sound effects, and it was so loud that I had to reduce the volume.

jiborgknight responds:

Yes your right about the font and the spelling mistake (english Is not my first language)
For the story of doesn't make any sense because this Is episode 2 if you dindt Watch episode 1 of this want make any sense

[Dexter is Sick of Dee Dee's Abuse]

So, the animation's okay, but the writing is completely off. There were several setups for potential jokes, but they literally went nowhere, and almost every new addition was random and added nothing.

Prime example that random =/= funny.

ivanmilicpilic responds:

Yeh yeh cool but do you think my Scottish accent is good though?